POF : [critique] Take a look 21/m
http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=96355439
This is the first profile across so many dating sites with which I’ve had any sort of success. I’m getting messages from girls, and I seem to be getting more replies overall in my messages, but I can’t really put my finger on why. (not that I’m complaining haha)
I spent a bit more time on the profile description, maybe that’s it đ
What does /r/Plentyoffish think?
By. delta301
you look 15 in your pics.
« Big boss in a retail chain »
NO. That’s awful. To me, that isn’t very ambitious.
Get rid of the big boss line, very juvenile. And do you DO management, or do you STUDY management??
Like the Wikipedia line though, glad the profile is working out for you.
Overall good profile, one of the better bio’s that I’ve seen. Funny, you talk yourself up, and to the point. Great job.
I’d edit only 2 things.
First: Night Owl. It’s not terrible, but a better descriptive word could be an improvement. When I hear night owl, I think « stays up too late », but thats just me. Maybe intellectual would be better. It’s a positive description, where as Night Owl is neutral.
Second: Your first date ideas. It’s ok that you say « meet for drinks », but I would delete (of sorts) at the end. Sounded wishy washy when I read it and since its not necessary, why have it. For the 2nd and 3rd dates, I think everyone would expect it to be fun, but you should have a few ideas. ***Ex: For a first date I’d like to keep it simple with conversation over drinks, teaching you how to bowl, or narrating old movies over a bottle of wine.
Let me know what you think of this, I like feedback too.