POF : Tried POF a couple times. Review my about me section.
So I tried POF a couple times. My first time was horrible. Met a girl in her 40’s looking to move out of her mom’s and into mines. Second time I tried a bit harder on my about me and had some better matches. Except I took to long to meet the girl and give her some d*CK so she stopped messaging me…
I’m going to try again and I’m thinking about putting this in the about me section.
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So I guess this is the part where I tell you how awesome I am. A little bit about my escapades in New York and Florida. Or how if you swipe left your gonna miss out on the time of your life. Well..I’m an honest, open ,humble man. Even if I wanted to lie, I couldn’t But that ain’t nessecarily bad. It just means I speak the truth no matter how raw it is and also take note. There is my humbleness. I try not to hurt feelings..
If your the type of girl that Like to spend quality time together. Then I think we have something in common. I appreciate your time and don’t want to waste it. So I ask the same.
Friday to Monday, I’m in the office helping people courageous enough to ask for help. and on my breaks I practice playing the guitar. I enjoy connecting with clients but when no one comes into the office for a session. I usually find them and teach them a skill or even learn something from them.
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I did not spell check for grammar. Also I don’t have pictures of me in Florida or New York. They got deleted a long time ago :(.
Be honesty, my feelings won’t be hurt. What should I change, add, delete, or anything else?
By. Over-Association3549
“Here is a bit about myself: I believe myself to be a open and honest man. I enjoy spending quality time with people I care about, and hopefully I can find someone like that through this online dating platform. One of my hobbies is playing my guitar (mention your favorite type of music and artist that inspire you). I work Mondays through Friday at an office where I enjoy helping my clients.”
Having a long bio is not necessarily bad, as long as it’s well written and not boring (but you do need to re-work yours). It definitely beats “I’ll write one later…” and never do or “ask me”. You mention being humble but it’s anything but that… since you mention that you’re awesome from the get go and telling chicks that if they swipe left that they are missing out on getting to know you (it sounds really douchey). You mention escapades (also don’t use the word ‘escapade’ unless you’re looking for a one night-stand) in NY and FL… but never once sharing any stories from those cities, so what’s the point? And don’t bother with the part about not having photos from those ‘escapades’. Seems more like something you can share during a first date (if any of the stories are good). Maybe also mention the type of job you do, you can still be vague but still give an idea of what area of work, like are you in the area of counseling etc. Also have a good clear profile photo, not one of you wearing a hoodie, sunglasses, or a hat.
Way too long